I fully agree with dixie. maven your verse was tight smooth flow great vocab and imagery, edicius your verse was tight to but the flow got thrown off alot when I was tryin to read through it but good imagery from both of u's and vocab was good. peace peeps. if u got time peep my new piece I'll be posting today called Down to Earth and leave some feedback plz. thanx in advance. peace.

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