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Punches= Di
Flow= Di
Personals= Di
Humor= Fos
Creativity= Fos
Wordplay= Fos
Complexity= Fos
Enjoyment= Di
Structure= Di, Both Had Bad Structure Though
Overall= DI

Figure Of Speech= Figure Out Structure And Connecting Punches. Your Punches Were All About Him Being A Little Kid..Did They Hit Hard? Nope.. You Need Personals. Work ON Punches, Structure, And Personals...1

Decrepit Impulse= You Had Ok Punches. You Had Bad Structure, Juss Like Figure. You Had Nice Personals, But NOthing Really Stood Out Like THIS. Lol, Nah Just Playin. Your Punches At Least Connected. But Your Structure...Its Wack...But You Pulled It Through With Your Punches. You Had Nice Flow. Try And Shorting You Lines UP, You Too, Figure Of Speech...1

Vote= Decrepit Impulse

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