if only i could vote, what i;m about to say would matter, but tehn, as i push towards i point when can, i guess the extra post is gonna help in the end. Lyrical Jedi seems to have been unfortunate in his leaving before finishing his post, so i can't say much about his stuff. As for smiley, his stuff was alright. Doesn't easily flow though, which is a pity, and some of the rhymes aren't to good, like 'SPITS IMPROVE' with 'SICK AND TRUE'. Also noticed a bit of 'day at the races in there' by Jurrasic 5, with 'Battered and slain' and 'scattered remains'. not sure if that counts as biting though. punch lines were good though, so i gues that makes up for it a bit. i'd have to say smiley wins though, but only cos they're isn't enough of lyrical jedi's work to draw a comparison. not saying smiley wouldn't have won if there was though.

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