Here's Lookin At You Kid
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^you were obviously gone for too long....stretched lines really hurt you nowadays.....and multis/vocab/rhyme scheme dont win battles......punches do......elevate.........nice werk tho.....your structure just needs some fixin.........you should take this easy!
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