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[Verse1]
ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars
but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars
too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes
get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME
i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun
as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run
so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost
u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss
wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus
now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous?[/verse1]
Weak kid rhymes
No good punches
Flow was ok.. but could use work
Used kid rhymes to much.......
Personals were lacked
Wordplay was lacked
Overall..........8/20
[verse2]
First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12
I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell
It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite
I take this W, you dont even put up a fight!
I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines
I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime
Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call
Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw
Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice
Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice[/verse2]
Straight...
Dope punches
good personals
Dope wordplay
Some funny lines
Flow was good
Overall......11/20
Vote--Technician-
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