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		My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors// 
Im BIG like espn magazine pictures// 
I will disregard the structure problem...this line was not a punch 
I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line// 
You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”// 
not a punch nor personal 
Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans// 
I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”//  
almost a punch but not quite 
I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told// 
You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold// 
I'm high strung like i posess five lungs// 
I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"// 
 
well i stopped breaking down bar by bar as i thought it 
was not going to help...sorry man but you put more of 
a open mic verse than a battle verse...... 
 
 
 
 
 
this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........ 
well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/........... 
not good 
i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........ 
cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison) 
decent wordplay though you dont need to bring it up 
this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........ 
this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........ 
/\played 
kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters............... 
this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider...... 
/\personal? 
youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him.......... 
like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him........... 
/\blah 
 
 
well all in all both verses were average though Vendetta wins 
because he had some attempts at punches and personals 
and he also had better structure 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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