Yo, this battle was pretty good. Here is the break down:

Vicious Thoughts:

Vicious thought's rippin this cat and dislocating extremities, Think he'll win the battle, he's trippin more then a fat kid playin DDR indefinetly
LOL... DDR....fat kids....LOL....trippin....i can picture it....lol 5/5

This cat think's his rhymes are clean cut and defensively ready, But he couldn't clean up his whack act if he fucken studied hygenistry
Weak punch, could have been better 2/5

Get the mod's over here this bitch was in an implication, I'm not talkin about biting or dick ryding but his rhyme's makin even black people incapable of procreation
Dont agree with the racism here, but other than that, a good punch 3/5

Vicious Thought's spittin more complex hits then a dictionary of a chinese nation, While Fo-Real just spit's whack causing inflammation
Good punch 4/5

Thought that the battle would be hot enough to be LLL my mistake I must correct, Cause when Fo Real spit's he'll have recked it
Flow a little messed up Reword it 3/5

0-0 Noob's path to his first win was intercepted, His Impulse is worse then this fag Decrepit
Nice general punch nothing special 3/5

So While my part of the battle was intensive, I leave you now read the whackness, the other elective
Again, messed flow. But nice ender, so 4/5

Overall: 24/35 = 68%
My Opinion: This couldve been a lot better. Come on. Make the flow easier to determine and use words that rhyme better.


Fo-Real:

Oh! i get it it know you just THOUGHT you was VICIOUS
just like da rest of theese rappers a bunch a bitches
Played out Rhymes. 2/5

leavin ya with stitches dawg you aint touchin my extremitites
cuz i'ma one man entity, that'll fire shells till da whole clips empty
These rhyme? 1/5

you soundin like albert einstien dropped acid and thought he could flow
but he woke up realized he was BACK and found out that he blow
Good rhyme. Funny. 5/5
alright bitch heres some infomation, this inflamation that i'm supposobly spitten/ sendin you to another dimention/ lyrically sendin ya to detention, my rhymes aint just made up they a fuckin invention/
Killer multi. This is what i expect from battles. at least 1 good multi 5/5

shits copyrighted to so dont try to steal it
playah hatah you gonna know dat i am da REALEST!
Weak ender. Filler 2/5

Overall: 15/25 = 60%
My opinion: This also could have been better. This guy uses to much filler and the words dont go together the way they should.


So. Vote goes to:

Vicious Thoughts

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