Thread: Tymez In Mind
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Old 01-12-04, 09:23 PM   #4
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This was alright i thought...you improved a lot since your last piece i read i think, good job....structure in this was good.....your flow in this was good through out i thought, it stayed on point through the whole thing....probably could have used a little better multies...but overall it was alright...keep at it.
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