Listed: your verse was well above average for front lines material. this is not saying much, however. Your lyrics were definitely the harder hitting in this battle. you need to work on more original concepts. the best way to elevate is to read others material. if you do this then i guarantee you wont use half as much played stuff thats not interesting to people.

Mysteriosa: you definitely need a bit more work than does the listed. your piece id say was average front lines material. try to get some personals in on your opponent or some wittier punches. hey, remember - practice makes perfect.. nobody will ever be perfect but keep trying. and dont type in caps, its annoying.