I guess Breth takes this one, both had good material but wack structures. Hey proph, i think you would have won but i didn't like some of your rhyming choice or that you didn't finish your ideas and the lines kept carrying on and on so it read like a long sentence. Sorry i can't vote.
Vote on this if you have the chance
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106285