I'm not used to this format, I'm stumped even if I read with an open mind. Maybe its too deep 4 me. Seems like it has to do with the bodies biomechanisms or somethin. Like you took a scientific explaination of processing feelings and converted it into a poetic explaination of essence. It wouldn't necessarily mean I'm not a poet if I don't understand it, it just means I'm not on your poems scientific/poetic level. It just means your more of a poet than the person who doesn't understand, but I say that to make reason... Otherwise, no I'm not a poet. D*mn...I can identify what you are attempting so, I must be one level below you. Theres no point in attaching your understanding to an electric impulse and mentally ride on it, exploring the rest of your bodily system. But if it helps you find your inner peace then don't quit writing like that, because you'll uncover something phenominal if thats actually where your spirit wants you to journey. Thats my understanding, I don't know if I'm even close but hey keep writing. Maybe if I didn't get so many F's in school and actually did my work, I prolly would be able to understand this poem. Your a great poet indeed from what I can and can't see.

edit: if you could, can you PM me the explaination of this poem and how you converted the complex body functions 2 poetry and 2 an extent where it is very difficult to understand. one more thing... what is the method 2 your style? I'm very curious... is sethroph your inspiration if he is why? You seem to have that ff7 sethroph/cloud story line inbedded into your brain very well. Clouds anxiety.. Am I close? Hell no?

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