Topic ---> 4/10 Think of more exciting topics, it will make it easier to rap.
Originality ---> 5/10 Same as topic.
Rhymes---> 5/10 Your using basic rhymes, use bigger words.
Multi's ---> none > Throw in some multi's if u can,
Metaphors ---> none > I hope u know what a metaphor is.
Flow ---> 6/10 Flow was ok, but could be worked on.
Structure ---> 6/10 Ok but again can be worked on.

an ok drop i guess, just keep practicin and askin for help with shit and youll elevate alot. just stick with it.