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Neuromances, great flow sometimes, good organization, and good imagery. I can say I smiled throughout the whole verse. Ja-e Roc, you have a lot going for you, which makes me think you've been rapping for a while now, but you have one major flaw. There's no flow. I need your rhymes to match up rhythmically when you're flowing. It's just too disjointed. Keep up the elevation.
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