There are so many great writers on this site. You are one of them. Amazing... Theres so many perspectives you can gain from this because of its immaculate imagery. The colors you incorporated just made everything picture perfect. I'm sure aflluentz is some foreign word that defines the nature of this poem. This was a nice piece relating to how we live. I enjoyed how you distorted the billboards and the metal 2 fit your own views of how the world is today. The flags on poles dead, I take it that your saying all the people are either doomed or dead. And in the end how irony set in because you focused your love on your soul mate even though you were going 2 die. Amazing poem. Overall this was deep. I enjoyed.

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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds'
nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol

none yall niggas wanna see me...