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Originally posted by The Realist
Rule...
Hmm, your verse was good but it seemed that while you were going to imagry, you feel short or were trying to hard to paint the picture that you wanted to say. Your flow was iffy at time, you can tell where...here..and here...throw it off if the whole piece doesnt have the consitencey of it.
Street...
Your verse definetly had a more abstract feel to it. Technically your verse was better i.e. multies, flow, rhyme scheme but i didnt like it. The way you rhymed was a style iv never seen but didnt enjoy very much. Your approach was very dream induced in how if unfolded.
Vote - Street
While rule's verse was a more enjoyable read, Street took it in the actual writing of the piece
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Imma have too go with what was said here aight....................
it sums up what needs to be said.......................
vote/street..............................aight......... ........................
peace............................................. .good battle............