Structure - 6/10
Flow - 7-10
Multi's - 8/10
Vocab - 7.5/10
Topic - 6/10
Originality - 8.5/10

A decent drop, your structure needs to be changed, and I wasnt really sure what u gettin at wit the topic unless swat is the name of your Crew... I felt some of your multi's were forced, it sounded good but the words didnt go properly with what u were talkin about in some points. Overall I give this a 6.5/10.

Your rhymnigs perfected, just work on better topics and I swear that will help u out alot. A better topic enables you to get deeper into what u rappin about, and u can make it longer, and it can make more sense.

with your structure.. you going

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It should have a consistant pattern like:

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Know what Im sayin?

Just keep droppin and keep elevatin.
Pz.