1st verse:
Was nice, you had some dope flow in there, nice use of internals n' lines n' bars were a nice length, well structured... You had good imagry here, as a british citizen i could relate to this well...you had some good wordplay in here, and as usually the use of vocab to potray the imagry was dope.

2'nd Verse:
Both mc's had good lines, damn flow was off the hook...lol, you both worked well together, again dope imagry and dope vocab...

4/5 - dope...sorry it's not really a detailed response..first time i've visited OM this year, just gettin' back into the swing of replying..lol.