Poetic typa ish here,liked this -

"Past disgrace, through hatred, futher onwards to love/
Passion seeks what the heart desires above/
In his glove, Lord holds the key to my fame/
Only he sees past the color, the race and the name/"

Good message and imagery in this peice,afew multies,vocab was descent,this was mostly about the message i feel and this was a descent drop man.

Peace