not a bad battle wish i seen more actual rhymes
"who the fuck iz u man, thinkin u explicit?
u juzt another fag, battle? dun even risk it"
that was a great starter but from there rhymes got a bit weaker

"ok mayne i read ya verse ya probably right mines worse//
still you "DUN" nomatter my verse gun shatter ya first//"
good starter also but keep it up more

i give the battle to explicit better punches and a bit more flow