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Old 01-13-04, 02:04 PM   #9
Diverse
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problem c, my vote is your a dickrider bitch...your vote shouldn't count....but as for the battle...here's the breakdown..

1-800-Stop FUCKIN HATIN' aint worth debatin' about/
we should really straighten this out with this K in you mouth/
kind of weak opener
yeah i'll pimp her on the street i'll mac to your bitch/
now say something i wont know come off your lips/
this isn't even a personal, not relevant
this dump off's a bitch and im talkin bout yeah im talkin to you/
you get pumped up bitch i ever walk into you/
your flow and structure is off
reason be lookin at me checkin and hatin'/
my bullets'll eat you skin like a leprocy pacient/
better.....
stop bitch you not hot quit your not big/
im to hott get chu meltin like choclate/
nope....not feelin this at all


I read your previous battles. .Look! It's RB's Cam'ron!
This kid couldn't feel stuck up. .If we threw him a tampon
decent opener...not bad..
Your chances are gone. .I'll run ya numbers like lotteries
I'm breakin this kid's self-esteem. .like bootleg pottery
pretty good punch
I hand out L's like donations, No!, You can't hold me
Hey Ill Heads! Wanna learn to be wack, call him. .It's toll free
haha...best line..funny shit
Bout to be 0-3. .This Kid's 3-Peatin his downfall
He couldn't feel like a winner. .If I hit him in his jaw
first lines good, second is ehh....
Fuck it, it's over. .Too bad you don't kno what hit you
This kid's wack. .I got him feeling smaller than shitsus
closer was kinda weak......

overall:reason took this battle, better punches, personals and wordplay...keep elevatin
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