You had an outragous flow here...dope use of internals, the structure was good, bars the same length, good syllable count....Vocab as well was immaculate, used the correct terminology to really express the message, you really made it stick wit me, was like a first hand account of it....Vocab was nice:

"Like a game of ‘patients’, until the ‘Aces’ are found
Til The top ‘cards’ are up, and the strife’s turned around" - relational...

4/5

Return the favour if you have time, thanx.
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