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Old 01-13-04, 03:50 PM   #2
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You dont need links anymore.

But this was alright....Your structure was ok, it could use touched up in a few spots though i thought, cause your lines were all different lengths.....you had some alright flow in this....try not to repeat the same multies over like you did with main squeeze twice, but you did have some nice multies in there....overall this was alright...keep at it.
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