I appreciat the 'escaping into own thoughts'. Though it's usually kind of rooted in reality anyway. It still is an escape. And not a directly rooted in it. Maybe i just dig too deep when in thought...hmmmm...

The portrayl of escapism and eventual reality was done quite well. You seemed to come off the top of yer head. But it kept a certain strcuture..helping to bring forth the overall feel of the piece...a feel of...erm...thought?!...i dunno...

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