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Old 01-13-04, 08:00 PM   #3
L.A.STR~E~TZ
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this poem is very good, great format i like the rhyme scheme alot. not much u need to improve on. well actually right now i cant think of anything. its very good, the message is strong, deep, and has sum originality to it. the vocab was good, it wasnt so hard that id have to pull out a dictionary, but still good enough that the rhymes werent old. very good poem, all around and meaning wise, wat can i say? keep it up man, good stuff, look forward to seeing more.

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