rockin merked the kid it wus fucking obvious yo yung u need to
elevate try dissin the person instead of just spittin rhjymin words..
throw in a punch or 2 maybe a multi or meta4...
my Vote-Rockin Flames-(reason)-merked him better punches flow structure metas...
overall better
hit up this battle n return the favor wit honest votes\/
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