Well....actually....math is really gay, I'm not sure
why you decided to write about it?






lol.....j/k

Anyways...
As always your multi's were right on
Concept was great...excpet it sounded...um... actually it was dripping of sarcasm,
and it might have been overdone, becuase i'm not sure too many people feel
that writing isn't important....

Speaking of math:

till they reach infinity, like an upside down eight

^^^
Actually 8 upside down is still an eight...more of a horizontal 8....lol

I actually liked this peice, I like the voice of all your peices so your good there

Umm....there is something messed up about this drop though....
I think it might be the amount of syllabals in some of the lines is more or less too
noticable, for my liking at least.

Ex:
i relay him my fate, and I try to solve it in class ..(14)
teach always said, world revolves around math (10)

Doesn't sound like much but to hold the flow you have to strecth the words
Simply adding a "the" or finsihing "Teacher" fixes it.....

I can't give to much constructive feedback becuase my writing blows ass but i try...

Overall...8/10

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