se7ev got this..harder punches..connected none was confusing dumb oor stupid pt..you need to elevate..try to think of some punches or clever disses..the boyfriend line made me laugh..but my advice..dont drop anymore gay lines because this whole website is quick to hate and start talkin bullshit..but anyway..se7ev gets my vote
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