Nice Drop, Now I Can See Where Your User Name Originates...Your Intro Kinda Reminded Me Of The Hook On That Tupac And Biggie Song For The Movie..Which Was Pretty Original..And You Had A Nice Flow, Good Vocab, And A Very Good Structure
Best Line:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Emotion:
Comtemplating if i would be a better person dead
A peice of lead is a doorway to another dimension
where i can release this tension, dont mention
The past Because then my emotions are released to fast
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Its Nice To See Alot Of Thought Placed Into A Drop..Good Work
Vocab - Very Good
Flow - Perfect
Structure - Perfect
Topic - Very Good
Originality - Very Good
Emotion - Perfect
I Gotta Give This A
9/10, Good Work