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Old 01-13-04, 11:55 PM   #16
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dayum this was nice shit here

ProPhett

Man this bitch is a fucking lame herb...Hes handicapped/
"lyrically challenged"cant think of his own verses that can rap/(mentally challenged)
^^^nice opener but still not WOWING
Just starting a dumbass punchline to get your ego bigger/
this bitch aint white but sure ass hell he wants to be a ni...../(u know what it is)
^^^errrr could have refrained from putting that in there
in fact he is just another punk that copies peoples shit off other sites/
Submits the quick reply/And then gets caught for shit he just bites/
^^^nice wordplay but not very good creativity
I dont know but ur rhymes are not going to hit any direction/
Only place they will go is the Black whole in outer space...In another Dimension
^^^^blah
Shit i bet he probably is ready to bite off me...Copys..then pasted/
Reconfigures my verses...Use them....Mods. finds out..he gets deleted/
^^^^nice shit there
Hell u aint nothing but another newb willing for a stupid win/
Has a alias probably...Votes for himself before i even checked in/
^^^^nice finisher

overall word on your punches and you got potential
7/10mics

Dimesions

i had a HOPE HE WAS NICE...now you CLOSE TO GETTIN ICED*
his spit had no impact...so he POSTED IT TWICE~
^^^funny and dope opener
focus and write...cuz i hope you NOT FOR REAL*
this dude couldn't "kick" shit wit me thru the "net" on a SOCCER FEILD~
^^^nice nice creativity and punch
STOP AND CHILL....rappin is not your PROPER SKILL*
and i'm an ol' man ready to barbeque...watch me POP YA GRILL~
^^^^sick sick line there
COCK THE STEAL...pump ya head till ya TOP IS FILLED*
watch this "actor" catch alot of "clips", it'll be hard to STOP THIS FILM~
^^^^LMAO still niceness here
you put alias's of ya wins and losses...the losses are a PAGE OF LAMES*
i'll just put the wins...so after this we'll be EXCHANGIN NAMES....EASY!!!!
^^^^OUCH fucking hard ass finisher


overall ya shit was made sick

9/10mics

overall vote goes to Deminsion
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