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Old 01-14-04, 12:25 AM   #2
Phoeniix
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you lost cuz u only had 2 notable/creative/strong bars in your verse.
everything else was decent....it wasn't filler, it just wasnt hard hitting because it was missing that creative aspect. i think the opener and closer were wack personally...no offense...and the other bars in there besides the west/east one and the beat/instrumental one were just only decent. i think prelude beat you because, though he wrote a bit non challantely, he still came harder. sometimes one can come with a more cocky approach and it just seems to have more attitude...therefore the punches connect and the whole verse disses better as a whole.

just my 2 cents.
hope it helped.

mad props on those 2 bars though, i really liked them.
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