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BI n' Sphere... the rating on your verse would be technically 3... out of a possible 10... played lines... forced or yet worse crap wordplay... Flow in Sphere's was ok... Bi no... All in all just didn't really like it at all...
a HERBAL Divide..seperating Vanilla from Cube
..they wanted to be Underground..
….so I made these Fools take the Tube
^was fucking stupid... there were no highlights...
Aisln' n' Emergency...
What... another alias? Might I add a nice n witty check in
Damn Brix... I've seen better structure..... following 9/11!
nice... could definetly have been worded better... was alot hotter when I did it... but good none the less...
A wack M-M verse it's a fact...his aplication's will soon retrack
They tried to spit some hot shit at the thread....
.......................................but the thread spit it back
^ good shit here...yet again could be worded better... but I suggest you find another structure n' flow for your verses... cause this one is honestly pretty garb... sorry broski...
vote Aisle n' Emergency... Aisle won it...
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