a piece full of emotion and raw thoughts, but still very nicely written. your emotions were the main focus of this, but still your structure and flow were good as well. its a topic everyone can relate to in their own way, and a topic that gets written about alot, but you managed to keep yours afloat by not dragging out what is said over and over again in every broken heart poem, and gave it your a jazz. it was simple and to the point, thou it was farily long. but i dont think that a poem being long is any fault, its the poem and thats how it is, if ppl dont want to take time to read a nicely written poem just because its longer then some others on here, then its their lose. anywho i enjoyed this piece you kept it alive and heartfelt.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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