I was really feelin' the piece Largo ... Creative ... Very ... Content was deep ... Piece was short but still had enuff to make it dope ... Imagery was dopie in this piece ... Gotta say one of the dopest drops I have seen from U also ...

slowly release rage through words on a tear soaken paper
and blind the guide who took the broken path he called safer
so I stand here now looking up, broken but stronger
and release a silent scream at love saying my hope is no longer

That was the standout part of the verse in my opinion ... I was lovin' those lines ... Keep it up ... Stay writin' man ... Good job here ... Peace