i like the way you started this, simple yet complex, it caught my eye right off. its such a happy going poem that makes you like it just for that, and im so glad for you! the way you introduced, lead into, your topic i thought was nicely written, with very nice vocab for this piece. and better yet is how you described just how much you love her, and how you always will. this piece is so natural feeling.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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