Flow, multis & rhyme schemes: 730's short structure made it easier to read...
dan your bars are long and stretched.....
Punches:
Now niggaz grab they glot, u better know what cha doing---
cause i'll fuck over ya in time like the old ancient ruins/
^^^not bad....one of the few time you spit a similie 6/10
call me that duce staley ass nucca, game day runnin thru vets
this one is aite too...but not aimed at your opponent tho~ 5/10
you DO blow..N if it really just occured to you bitch
then i'll shove u in a righteous path....right down a fuckin cliff
^^set up is nice and its also funny...6.5/10
he's pulsin stiff, rigomortis your bones to hang-ups ya prone
cuz I'm poundin dude until his ass hears fuckin dial tones
^^^nice metaphore here....7/10
My vote obviously goes to 730, due to better punches, rhyme scheme and flow...
please return the favor and
vote here