ok ok
tak knows who i am...
dont feel like signing on as my other name
just to vote on this...

anyway...
weezy..right off the bat your verse just looked very newbish and played
lines were not even...and the " / " at the end of the lines is played also..
lose'em u dont need'em...
punches didnt really hit...and some didnt make sense..
nice try though...give you props for showing for the fight...
taktik is one of the best on the site...so dont take it to heart..

taktik...short but sweet...
liked the creativity on that last bar the most...it was funny and original
only needed six lines to take this with ease...
flow and structure was your normal..
therefore

v/taktik

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