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Old 01-14-04, 01:00 PM   #7
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ight, nice battle... 1st up..

osiruz -

don't expect you to come first, your too-weak-to
u r still gonna be left behind because iam gonna P-Q[peak you]*
^ nice line, good punch. and i like tha p q comes before u r

find-your-smacked-hard, when you try-to-rap-scarred
after I leave you "rolling fucked" like-you-avatar
^ haha, nice! good punch, rolling fucked line wuz tight.

your faggotish resemblese shows in a flow-so-bland
iam too raw-for-stan, actin like a QB the way ima throw-your-plans
attack ya peeps with sharp weapons, no one likes you cuz i SAW YOUR FANS!!!
^ HOTT SHIT! tha QB line, and tha saw your fans line were tight

despite-the-call this fag is too shook all he can do is hide-or-fall
have him smoke pounds of weed and he still wont drop sick high-per-bowl[hyperbole]!!!
^ nice vocab! and hott finisher! although, half these ppl prolly dont know wut a hyperbole is lol

ight... next up...

solgooberdier -

I'll delete you from the atmosphere then obliverate your atoms to the statosphere//
Punk mother fuckers go down you know what happens here//
^ nice vocab... not really a solid punch though

Your rhymes suck like 3 transvestites with a dildo//
I suspect you dropped your verse then called your boy to get fucked in the ass real slow//
^ nice bar! tight punches.

I'll talk publically about your sexual choice since you dont// Everybody knows now so rejoice, but you wont//
^ umm, WEAK... if he wont talk about it, why wuld he rejoice?

Dont front we know your gay//
I read it between the lines of the shit you say//
I see through you like light in the day//
we dont want fagets surfin this site go away//
^ pretty weak, tha only good part wuz between tha lines you say

Your wack, and I'm on attack to assault as many emceeing fagots like you as I can with rap//
Watch your back cause I'll be blowin up the spot where you live at//
^ no punches. you need punches in a battle! 99% of your verse is filler homie

You cant rap you dont have gift//
My style is swift, after this you'll need a face lift cause my punches hit so hard your face will shape shift//
^ now thaz a tight fucking line! nice solid punch! your best line yet.

I'm dangerouse when I bus and hazardouse to Osiruz//
I'm meticulouse and overly ridiculously fastidouse//
Your style isnt new to us//
I'm the king of this shit A.K.A your HIGHNESS.
^ sorry, but half tha werds here didnt rhyme. and tha werds you used lol... nice vocab, but it might help spelled right. lol

my vote - osiruz... more punches, better punches, less filler.

PEACE!!!
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