Thread: BombZ vs. Eki
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Old 01-14-04, 02:24 PM   #26
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Ok, here's tha breakdown:

Bombz - bombed. most of your "punches" were little more than wordplay, nothing really hard hitting. You definitely have a creative mind, I think with a little more emphasis on personals you could be a heavy hitter. My only advice - humor not necessary for hurtful punches. but humor is good, enjoyable read, no beef, you just haven't fulfilled your potential yet, but it is there for sure.

Eki - similiar to Bombz in lacking hard hitting punches, though I did see more personals from you, which I feel are the true grit of a battle. unfortunately his creativity far outweighed yours in this battle, which made his verse stand out more. I liked the "less than 2/3" of the crew name punch, nice personal. I see a lot of potential for you as well, keep it up.

My vote goes to Eki for the personals/punches

yall hit up my battle with Dadi Kewl (just click the link in my sig) and drop an honest vote. peep the way I broke him down and see if you feel me on what I am saying about punches/personals. peace dogs
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