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returning da favour..thanx for your feedback on my shit....
Flow here was silky, you had some mad internals in here, really showed your abilty to not only rhyme but to execute it in a dope fashion. Structure too was good, bars were same length and it kept it all "orginzed".
As usual, you have dope vocab....you didn't over do it, it didn't look like you sat down wit a dictionary n' theasarus beside you, looked like it all came naturally...well done.
Concept was straight, never seen it done on rb before, you really shone through, especially at the end, transcended past outstanding here...lol, dope though.
4/5 only think i neva like - was the colour scheme...lol.
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