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Old 01-14-04, 03:19 PM   #21
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Seven hit those personals and hit em well...

Flowed tight, format was on, rhyme scheme was hittin.

Poetic was aight and hit a bit harder...

But that alone don't win everything..

For one, your opener's end rhyme was "you"...

Then ya went and rhymed it with..."you".

Could ya get more simple?

"Mime" is played, most anything concerning "gats" are played.

The whole verse was kinda blah.
(cept for the "asshole" line, I'll give ya that one)

The rest were straight forward insults.
No wordplay, no decent metas, no complexity.

Seven didn't floor me with his creativity or complexity either...

But he did his research...

I love personals in battle.

They make so much more impact than straight disses.

Peace

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