You had a dope structure here, really blending in nicely...Accompied with strong internals and complex rhymes it really made this piece stand out. Your vocab was good, used some nice terms here, fitted in with what you were trying to say....wasn't feeling this though:

"Climbing rocks and barriors while barefoot
Consuming insects I've capture & squooshed"

although:

"Speaking wisdom among young youth
Virgin ears peep the words containing truth" - was straight from the lab on that one!

3/5 dope piece, loved the topic...think what really stood out was the fact that it was short, but made an impact...

give some feeback on: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106501 - if ya have some spare time...cheers,