Had some nice flow here, dope internals throughout, you pulled it off pretty well, but i thnk you overused alot of words n' terms here...it seemed the flow was stretched in places, but overall it was pretty good.
Liked the topic...it's good that some people can write shit about rb, lotta good relational shit in here, was a good read...
"message it was sending, the concepts portrayed at the ending,
Though, my feelings on Weezy's "America" is still pending,"
"And if I could accompish having a thread in this so say, perfect potion,
The thought would be a "Reflection of Fate" , that I to showed magical devoution,"
- some dope bars...
3/5 if you have time can you return the favour??
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