Pretty sick..
The concept was basically nothing too new, just added a newer twist with the day and night thing goin on. Also, The last verse was very very good with the dialogue and a nice twisted ending. I felt at somepoints your rhymes seemed to get a little forced, and it made your flow a bit choppy. The conflict was played out very well, and despite its weaknesses, it turned out to be a strong piece.

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