Yo I cannot poll vote, but I want to up my post count so that someday I can.
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Hey, It Could Be 'Worse Though'/
And Listen, I Wouldnt Be Callin You "SON" If Ur Momz Had Taken Her 'Birth Control// prolly my best line...
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Meh. Rhyme's a bit off, the punch isn't that original, for being your best line, it's not a great one.
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When i get hard wit rhymes i shine like lip gloss/
u pissed off cause ya dick small so the condom slipped off//
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hm... iight...
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fuck ya verse u can’t even bite off mine/
Just Call Me An Operator, Tha Way I Gotcha Life On The Line//
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multis off, i understand what your goin for, but it doesn't really connect
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Ive thought about it and ive come to the conclusion/
that imma kill so bad he gonna need a blood transfusion//
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heh, just thought, if he's really killed a blood transfusion would do nothin...
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fuck around and my lyrics will seperate ur interior frum ur exterior jus ta show u who has tha superior motivation/
my lyrics act as if they were poisen, come in contact, get ur skin attacked, and tha result is ur coloration seperated frum ur skin fabrication//
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STrectched out! The punch here isn't that hard hittin either, man. . . Gotta come with those punches, I dont' know what else to tell ya, you got some good ideas just need to word them better. keep risin up.
now for
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limitz will never make his MIND DEFEAT THIS,
cuz when my RHYME RELEASES
his weak lyrics get shattered into a thousand TINY PIECES
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good multis, not that hard of a punch but alright
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i mean i might ass well leave your RAPS KILLED
cuz the FACTS STILL that you LACK SKILLS
your intelligence does not exist like CRACK PILLS
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multis again. The last line ain't hittin, though.
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so this battle you CANT WINNIT
your just a TRAMP GIMMICK
your fuck rhymes filled with more stretch lines than fat CAMP CLINICS
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ha, nice.
overall,
takes this for better punches, multis, a more entertaining verse overall.