I roll over this bitch wit a tire, and go straight through the wire
He couldn’t burn rhymes, if he set a Dr. Suess book on fire
^^weak opener...and very played concept
So question, this situation that I keep trying and pressin’
I use my words wisely and he uses his as a suicidal weapon
a lil better than the opener...it's aight
Rejection, he’s gonna spit by 12, writing 5 hours to himself
Wouldn’t help, if he soled his soul 2 Satan while he vistied hell
^^makes no sense....two different ideas
OOO well, maybe Grade A shit, so let’s say OK bitch
He thinks he’s bad wit 200+ posts, turned into 200 gay spits
^^weak lines...sorry
Se7eN will rip ya, eat ya, and squat and go ahead and shit ya
Because my punches tend to hit ya where the Lord split ya
^^nice flow N multis...but that's it...no punch
So keep calm, while I drop ya a lyrically blowing up bomb
Remove you from this site and it still will be rapbattles.com
^^weak closer....it was worst than the opener..

On the real playa I think that you're havin a problem with concepts......you got ya structure and flow down but ya punches need some work....keep elevatin...



nobody loves to hate you, and nobody hates to love you
in fact nigga, no one's really thinking of you
^aight...could've been worded better
haha, i already merked you, with only two goddamn lines
you're whole crew's worthless, like a paralyzed mime
^^1st line's filler....second is played
i'd give you all your lyrics, and even a fuckn gat
even with both, you couldn't put a hole in my back
^^weak punch
clack clack, is the sound from the lyrics you flow
your rhymes are empty, unlike your boyfriends asshole
^^played concepts
you're a perverted mother fucker, killing emcees when you "spit right"
shit dawg, you spit first, and didn't even put up a fight
^^could've went somewhere with that but not much of a hit
fuck spittn a rhyme and becoming a soldier with time
i'm already a goddamn coronel, you're a fuckn private of mine
^^simple rhyme scheme....nothin special for a closer

overall ya verse was blah....you had the only real punch of the battle which was your opener....everything else was blah to me..... a lil bit of a stronger verse than Se7en but it could've been better......

vote-Poet...