BTK

D-reed's about ta get waisted, cuz he lives right below...
When he claims his location's 'sac' he don't mean 'ramento'.
Ha...good opener, nice punch
He's talkin bout nuts, how he loves when they crack...
And since he's a bitch, they get cracked all over his back.
Decent Punch
Hip Hop Junky? Hip Hop wishes ya'd find another vice...
It's tired of being used, and tired of you asking for advice.
Another Decent Punch
I'll take this bitch's pride, all he's got till there's no excuse...
Since I'm cleaning out a pussy, consider my rhyme a douche.
Ha...nice punch
Dreamed of facin me & got a lesson, his subconcious wasn't fooled...
So today D didn't bother going ta class, cuz he woke up schooled.
Good Closer With A Nice Punch


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yo this dude's 34 years old- how the fuk u got a record of 90-84 battlin 12 year olds=-
ur vocabs weak n rhymes reek of mold- bitch betta retreat cuz mines eat through skulls=-
Nah...hes been here a long time, thats how many wins he has and im sure that there are some dope 12 year olds some where...wack opener
born to kill -lol - u for real ? i got horns of steal- that peal leavin yea face down in open fields- with black tracks from the possi traction..swealin as i spinnin des wheels=-
Really...kid...lay off the mulits...they mean shit...work on ya punches
u betta forfeit cuz u was born to neal- now peal back this forskin n eat a meal=-
little bit of word play...
vets like u get snacked on- left in toliets like tampons- kids like me laugh on- @ 34 year old sons- still livin @ home with moms=-
Hes married with a kid...lol...another fake wack personal
time to move on which ur imaginary- cant fuk wit rhymes that are legondary- ur wurd plays been burried- bring ur fukin rhyme book to DREW CARRY=-
Blah...not feelin it one bit..sorry kiddo
tell em that ish is out dated- ur whole fukin image is gold plated-ur whole fuckin spit sound like somethin u regurgitated
You didnt hear it...its text, how u know what it sounded like?
-u need to elevate kid- n u did- when i pop'd ur top n left yea decapitated=-
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Overall - BTK By A Mile

[BD work on ya struct and punches..lay of the multis[/B]

This is how ya struct should look like...

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And So On...

Drop The == and all the --- stuff