ahhh i loved it.. i wish i coulda thought of a topic like this to write about...
anyways... you hit this great... i like how you layed it out
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that was dope... content was very well done in this piece...
i liked that it wasn't a whole fuckin novel too...
and it was a good read... good flow...
i was flowin it in my head to like a nas approach n it was dope lol


so yeah.. dope piece my man