Yeah not bad ay..Some lines I wasn't feeling at all...That Criminal Justice shit ruined it a little.."Entertainment was hated" that just sounds soo child book i dunno...for some strange reason I wasn't feeling that but ay overall the ideas were good and written quite well...On a structural note...I'm still undecided on whether the two verses should mesh together...Un-seperated...guess it takes a little away from the personal credit but ay it still didn't come together too bad ay...well done...keep at it fellas..Check out me piece too ay.."I Always Keep My Lights On..Cheers...Pz...

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