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Old 01-14-04, 05:38 PM   #2
Orikle
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That was fucking dope...I'm serious ay haha...not many things make me go YEAH! on this site so to get a compliment off me is tops! haha...

"It hurt to move on alone,
Still she picked up her feet
And tried to vanish from his sight,
From the hateful eyes that made her bleed."

That was quite nice there...It was just very consistent...nothing very corny at all...well written...Imagery was full on...good on ya..you've done well...Hit my piece up for me ay..."I Always Leave My Lights On"...Cheers...Props & Pz...
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