.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Not a bad story but its a little simple and the flows a little sketchy..just work on the vocab...keep at the rhyme scheme and get things sorted..all in time mate...HIt my piece up..."I Always Leave My Lights On"...Cheers...Pz...
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